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Jill A.
Industrial Engineering, Class of 2028
Clemson & Rochester Institute Admit
Rochester and Clemson both accepted Jill into their Industrial & Systems Engineering programs. We repositioned her electrical engineering background as her competitive advantage showing how her work reducing equipment downtime by 40% at Ghana Grid Company and developing IoT automation systems was industrial engineering in practice. Her SCADA optimization demonstrated workflow efficiency. Her Smart Fan project showcased process automation and energy management. Most importantly, we highlighted her experience adapting engineering solutions to Africa’s infrastructure challenges, which are practical insights most IE candidates lack. Rochester Institute of Technology awarded Jill a $12,000 tuition waiver, giving her a choice of top programs.
Selassie S.
Business Analytics, Class of 2027
Drexel University Admit
Samuel had the competencies—an accounting background, analytics expertise, and years of experience writing financial reports and conducting audits—but MS Business Analytics programs receive countless finance professionals claiming they can “pivot to data.” We made Samuel’s case irrefutable. We positioned his audit work as advanced analytical practice: identifying patterns in financial data, assessing risk through numerical analysis, and translating complex findings into actionable reports. His accounting wasn’t a tangential background—it was proof he already operated at the intersection of data interpretation and business decision-making that Business Analytics programs teach. The result was a $16,000 scholarship at Drexel’s MS Business Analytics program.
Kofi O.
MBA, Class of 2025
Cornell & Columbia Admit
Kofi had the credentials—first-class honors in finance, $5 million in treasury management at Fidelity Bank, and a 20% portfolio return increase at Bora Capital. Yet Yale School of Management rejects countless qualified finance candidates. We needed to make him unforgettable.
We reframed his diverse experience as proof of versatility most finance professionals lack. Treasury operations demonstrated capital markets expertise. His operational improvements—50% faster processing, $5,000 in penalty savings, and streamlined vendor negotiations—showed process optimization thinking. His Finance Committee leadership achieving 15% ROI proved he could manage money and people. We positioned Perry as someone who’d bring both technical depth and cross-functional leadership to Yale’s collaborative MBA environment.
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Our Statements of Purpose have helped applicants stand out to top Ivy League and globally ranked universities, including Harvard, MIT, Stanford, Oxford, and Cambridge.
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